Wow, beautiful! It really paints a picture, as only music can. I could imagine a shy girl taking a stroll through a field, or something thereabouts. Really quite good! It had the perfect feel to it, and lives up to its title. I think I need to listen to it again. This inspires me as a composer to create something myself.
Thank you too.
It's funny, but this music started as a pure e-piano piece for a scene with a girl reading book in a library. Then i decided to add some instruments and make more comples arranged. Somehow it ended as an fantasy orchestral music. %)
That's really all I had to say, but I'll push myself to find some "constructive criticism", since that's what the review thing's about.
You're tending to banter a bit with your voices. Also, you shouldn't diss yourself during your segments, it makes it seem like you're not serious. (Which I'm fairly sure you are.)
An' what's with all the nasty stuff? Don't be so dark man.
Hope this helps, and remember, I'm a noob amateur so my opinion matters.
The accent adds a lot to the voices. You're speaking a lil' soft though, so you might wanna work on projecting a bit more. Also it's too short. :(
The villain voices were really cool by the way.
Well, 8 is not bad score for the first record in my life :-)
Thanks for the advice (about the accent) - i really didn't "heard" it for my own. I'll try to work on it ;-).
Thanks for the comment and im looking forward to see your comment on next record, that will include advice of yours ;-).
I agree with knightlight87
Your initial inflections weren't failures at all, but you need to add some variety of voices to it. Just try bending your voice a bit, you could make it raspy, or low, or squeaky. Just play around a bit, try to improv a scene off the top of your head. That's what I do. (Probably 'cause I don't have any scripts, and I'm mostly just havin' fun rather than being serious.)
Thanks! I'm actually recording this FOR knightlight87, and he gave me a script for a scene.
So I'll take your advice and just have fun with it.
I'm just waiting until I'm alone in my house so I can record in peace. :/
It sounds a lot less cheesy than the in-game version. Well done mate.
"Don't feed the trolls!"
*Best part. It sounded like a voice straight from an audio book. Methinks you'd make a good narrator.
I have to be honest, I didn't find the first part funny. But the second one was seriously hilarious! "I'm talking beer-battered fillets of crispy deliciousness!" Lol! Was that something original? Or did you get it from something?
Lol I'm glad you enjoyed it. The second part was an audition for Ross and Craig. The dude didn't like that voice because he sounded to old lol.
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